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  • PostFri Oct 06, 2017 9:46 pm
WARNING: NOT FOR YOUNGER AUDIENCES. VIOLENCE AND DEATH AHEAD. DISTURBING THEMES.

A yell escaped Bloom as she was pulled into the ground by the hand of an elderly man. She was immediately shushed by the amount of force that she was thrown onto the grown with. "Who are you?!" She demanded, shaking but trying to force her fear away. Ignore the fear. It will leave. It won't be there..

It won't. And that was a promise.

We all fight it. Don't we?

She awoke in a sweat. "F-Flora..." She said, running over to her friend and forcefully shaking her. "Wakeup,wakeup,wakeup!" She yelled, not taking notice of the blood. Not until Musa ran in. "BLOOM?! FLORA?!" She yelled, staring at the bodies in horror. Fight it, figh it, fight it! Concern, sadness, anger..

To consume ones soul..

She awoke shaking.

And to her surprise, Tecna was already awake, working on something. "Tecna!" She said, walking over. But she wasn't walking for long. Tecna screamed. "M-Musa?!" She yelled, checking for a heart beat. She found none. That's when Stella walked in.

The monsters don't leave. They finish what they started.

She awoke with panicked noises.

"...Tecna?" She asked, staring sadly at her friend. "It's alright to cry-" She was cut off by the shocking moment of Tecna breaking into robot pieces. "W-What the-?!?" She was pushed against the wall by a familiar animal fairy.

It'll be over soon. She's almost the last one left.


As usual, one awoke with horror in their mind.

"Who started it?!" Roxy demanded, shaking Stella roughly.

"Bloom d-did.." Stella had only that to reply with. Then she was gone.

Isn't it funny? We think we won the game, then we lose..

Roxy also vanished.

Nobody is left. Nobody wins.

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  • PostFri Oct 06, 2017 9:51 pm
That is really good. Really deep. I like it.

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  • PostFri Oct 06, 2017 9:54 pm
Thanks, I worked hard on this.

Even though it only took me around,,, 7 minutes

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  • PostFri Oct 06, 2017 9:56 pm
Well,   it is really good for a 7 minute story. Will you be continuing this or will this be just a short story kinda deal?

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  • PostFri Oct 06, 2017 9:57 pm
Probably just a short story. But I might make little stories for the holidays

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  • PostFri Oct 06, 2017 10:00 pm
Okay. Sounds good. Short stories are awesome. I have thought of making a book on wattpad with a bunch of horror short stories in it. Or come up with jokes or something. Maybe I will do that some day. Smile

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