a beautiful night turns out bad chapter five final chapter

yay my story i finally finish it after a year i hope you enjoy it
Bradon flashes his light on the person or creature is coming
its a cat
Ivy relivied its a cat
Are you okay Ivy?" asked Emily and Brandon
Brandon helps up Ivy
"Yes Im fine,crashed into the old dresser didnt see it.",said Ivy
"I wish the lights would go on.",replies back Brandon
"Me to.",said Emily
Emily flashes her light on the window to see it would open for sunlight there are bars on the windows
"Wow bars on the window.",wonders why Emily
"Thats weird,maybe there bars on the window Julie made when Kyle smelt smoke he couldnt escape through the window.",said Ivy
"Maybe,or maybe when was sleeping she would put him in the bars trap in him in there.I watch to many horror movies.",agress Emily
When the girls are talking Brandon thought about something
"You never know she would have done anything to kill him.",replies Ivy
"Girls I thought about something the ghost can move anything he might throw stuff at us becareful.",said Brandon
"Okay.",both say Emily and Ivy

Did you girls ever had ghost dream? wonders Brandon
"One time I dreamed I was lonely wondering around.",said Ivy
"Horrible dream,I dreamed ghost hunt me.replies Emily
"Ouch,I dreamed i was eating ghost attack me when about to kill me Ivy came to rescue me.smiles Brandon
"Im glad I came on time.",smiles back Ivy

Here comes the ghost and the ghost puts the house on fire then grabs Emily and Ivy and then hurrys and leaves
"No! Ivy and Emily.",replies BrandonThe ghost ties Emily up on the chair and then after hurrys up and puts Ivy up on the tree
"How did the ghost know im scared to clim down the tree?wonders Ivy Emily tryes to break free she couldnt
"The ghost home is huge it take me forever to find the girls Emily and Ivy where are you.",scream out loud Brandon"Second room left side.",said Emily
Brandon runs to the second room fast and the door is lock he breakes down the door "Brandon boy im glad you here.smiles Emily Ivy about to fall off the tree."I have to get over my fear Ivy says to herself.",scared Ivy
Brandon tryes to slash the ghost in half with his sword the ghost trips brandon and his sword falls and breakes
the ghost gets on top of Brandon lights a match
"I dont think so.",said BrandonIvy unties ",Emily Ivy you okay.",smiles Emily "Dont give up Brandom you strong used what you learned in martial class.",smiles Ivy Your right I can do this.",courage Brandon
Emily,Ivy,and Brandon hurry up leave
they made it out on time

That is really good!

what was your favorite part

I liked the bottom paragraph where it talks about the ghost. That was fun to read.

in real life did you ever have ghost dream my favorite is when ivy gets over her fear climbing down the tree

I have had ghost dreams before. They were weird.

i never had maybe someday i will i had zombie scary dream before

please be honest with me are the fighting parts borning i want to sell my story i need to know if the fighting parts are borning i fix the fighting parts